The little shoe maker
One day the little shoe maker was just opening when suddenly a long evil shoemaker came and parked his car on the stoney foot path then when a customer came he saw the evil shoes but the little shoe maker shoes were prettier than the little shoe maker lowered his price and stole the little shoemakers customer sadly
Had no customers he tried everything one night he saw a letter so his shoes told him to paint old shoes gold next morning he got the paper and the golden shoes and gave him the golden shoes he took it finally he wore the golden shoes and the golden shoes made him run away for good. by zaak
he bro your work is amazing keep it up
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ReplyDeleteI really like your story
next time can you make the story longer
thanks from amber.
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ReplyDeletehi zaak i like the way you told me the shoemaker story. and i also like the way you use words like finally then next.
ReplyDeletenow you could just press enter because your words were to far away.
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ReplyDeletethis work is very quality because you have put a really amazing picture in your work.this reminds me of buying shoes at the shoe shop . perhaps you could add more writing.
ReplyDeleteyou did a wonderful job on your shoemaker story.next time you could try and you could use enter so it doen't go to the end and so people don't have to move it to the right. this character makes me think of buying shoes
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