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Monday, November 26, 2018

gum boot throwing writing

One day we were doing a gumboot  throwing contest and writing about it.

We stretched and  threw the boot flew like a bird and hit the ground and we ran to get our  we threw pretty far it was fun to do we did it separate tho

1 comment:

  1. Hi Zaak I like the way you put a simile in the throw part. Maybe you should put gumboot on the last word in the 2 sentence. This work reminds me of when I'm doing the gumboot throw too.

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