One day we were doing a gumboot throwing contest and writing about it.
We stretched and threw the boot flew like a bird and hit the ground and we ran to get our we threw pretty far it was fun to do we did it separate tho
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Hi Zaak I like the way you put a simile in the throw part. Maybe you should put gumboot on the last word in the 2 sentence. This work reminds me of when I'm doing the gumboot throw too.
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