2. says where they live.
3. say there talent.
4. tells the problem
5. tells how they felt
6. tell how they got there problem.
this is my six sentence story.
I am a student at Wigram Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Zaak, Im Kezia (Your friend AND you classmate)
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you used colors and a photo. Maybe next time you could write a capital letter for M on Moscow . Do you like the army?